I'm helpless.
What do I do?
I can't control me.
I can't control you.
Things are spinning,
around and around.
I'm getting dizzy.
I can't hear a sound.
I'm going numb.
I fell in the grass.
I felt something sharp.
I fell on my glass.
My body went cold,
my eyelids closed.
My body grew old,
for days I dozed.
I awoke to the sound of a clock.
Tick, tock. Tick, tock.
They say I was asleep for 13 days.
I don't remember. It's all a haze.
I had to go through weeks of rehab.
I got out and went back to the meth lab.
Little did I know that again I would O.D.,
only this time, I wasn't so lucky.
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The rhyming scheme in the second last stanza changes though, and I think it cuts up the rhythm too much. Other than that, it's an awesome and emotional piece.
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